doing review and correct the errors of my essay

I will upload my document and please fix it.

this my professor’ notes and I want you to improve it:

for abstract: Write clear abstract that identifies a fieldwork site, explains why it is important, and uses at least one peer-reviewed source. (Comments previously made on the abstract were not completely addressed. What is the research question?)

Field Report: Write in-depth field report based on participant observation, fully addressing the five points above.(Elaborate more on social interactions that are significant.)

Notes: Transcript of participant observation notes and write it after the sources and appendix (make notes for the paper like key answers and write it down).