review critique the story

I have an essay homework due tomorrow. So whoever will work in this paper I need someone can read the story and write critique/review about the story. The stories not long and easy to do it. and the other thing is my english not perfect and ,my professor knows about it so the paper shouldn’t be with so perfect grammar words. And it should be following with APA Format. You can choose the one of the following stories from the file.

Thanks,