thesis

I need some help rewriting my thesis. I don’t like it but I’m struggling writing something better. I need to keep the 3 key points, it’s just the main claim that I’m not liking.

The article’s main claim of “Some Lessons from the Assembly Line” is to compare college and a blue-collar job because it shows us the importance of job security, the value of education, and the benefits of working at a blue-collar job during summer breaks.